The Elemental Destiny - Chapter OneN O T E :Our brains are generally unable to process the oddities in this world that so often fall upon us. Things like this are what come across as strange to us, clogging up our minds and makes us unable to process things. We are so accustomed to the average that when something breaks the chain, our natural reaction time slows and we stand there like fish out of water.I am sad to say that while there aren't many fish in this story, there are quite a few anomalies. Things cannot be unread once you have chosen to continue. So it is now that I warn you of the tragedy that has befallen these people, I warn you of what is to come and what mig
FEEDBACK NEEDED!FEEDBACK GREATLY APPRECIATED!(This shouldn't be a deviation, but there's not other way for people to see this really...)I would like some constructive criticism, ideas and help with my novel ^^''Currently, I'm stuck a predicament. Predicament being that I'm not sure where to take it, and what details/information I should include when.I've reached a part in the story (roughly around chapter 6 or 7) where I am indecisive as to whether or not I should bring two (potentially vital) characters in now, or earlier. The characters have information on the main villian, who is currently holding the main character's brother captive. (Her reason